A True Strzyga Tale, So Forget the Movies You’ve Seen by Luanne Castle

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Alwine stayed on the bank of the creek long after the wash was done and ready to be hauled back and hung to dry. Her mother used to slap her for dillydallying, but her mother was dead from congestion of the brain and her father and brothers busy in the Graf’s fields. Today she pulled an apple from the pocket of her inner skirt and lay back to appreciate the slow-moving clouds and lavender cornflowers. Alwine had been born with a special spark, just like her mother. Her mother could talk to animals. Alwine herself felt the emotions of trees. Once a week, she dragged herself through the dirt, muddying her arms and legs, to quell that bit of brilliance.

She dragged her heels on the path home because it was her duty to stop at her mother’s grave. As the mound came into view, she saw that the cage over the burial site was crooked, as though someone tried and failed to tip it over. The lime mortar had held. Still, Alwine’s chest seemed to have a swift trapped inside it. Her limbs trembled. But no matter how much it cost her in strength, she didn’t scream. Because she had been there when her mother was buried, she knew what she would find if she dug with her hands, dirt caking inside her fingernails. A wooden stake through the eye, iron spikes pounded into her tongue.

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  1. Avatar de merrildsmith

    People who are different, especially women, have always been persecuted.

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    1. Avatar de Luanne

      Yes, Merril, exactly. I think the Polish region’s concept of vampire is very similar to that of witch.

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      1. Avatar de Luanne

        Anneli, yes, you may read it however it’s most meaningful to you. But Alwine’s mother was killed for being a «vampire,» meaning different. And to prevent her coming back to life they make some adjustments to her grave. 🙂

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      2. Avatar de merrildsmith

        Ah–well, that makes sense.

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  2. Avatar de wordsfromanneli

    Or maybe it’s not meant to be so sinister, but rather that her mother would never die. She would always be alive in Alwine’s head.

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    1. Avatar de Luanne

      Anneli, yes, you may read it however it’s most meaningful to you. But Alwine’s mother was killed for being a «vampire,» meaning different. And to prevent her coming back to life they make some adjustments to her grave. 

      🙂

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  3. Avatar de Miriam Hurdle

    I used to be afraid of shadows. I didn’t know how to handle it had I seen my parents’ shadow after they passed away. I used to have a friend in my class who could see and talk to their family members who passed. When her father passed away, he showed up to her sister first. My friend was upset she didn’t have the priviledge to be the first.

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