Tanka —02 by Luanne Castle

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after The Lady of Shalott (1875) by John Atkinson Grimshaw

after Millais’Ophelia (1851-52) by Sir John Everett

when I think of her

seeing the miniature

longboat drifting down

river pulsing underneath

a fierce prow for protection

her dress just a shroud

her eyes now closed by others

or spread on her back

her bluest eyes still open

wildflowers clutched in her hand

always this story

not for love but self-love’s lack

their rudderless selves

who can remedy

it, only more of the same

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2 respuestas a «Tanka —02 by Luanne Castle»

  1. Avatar de jeannieunbottled

    Beautiful and poignant …. a warning

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    1. Avatar de Luanne

      Thank you so much!

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